Angel of Death

I really think that this has promise...its just that 1. It really needs to be spaced out more 2. I want to hear more descriptions you know like Quinn was ...

Thanks Sokool. I was thinking about the Salem witch trials when I was writing this which I think happened to Massachusetts...I'm taking U.S. and all the location details are a ...

I really loved this...*sniffles* you painted the portrait of a break-up and a pained soul so well. You made me feel so bad for this guy. I really really am ...

Wow this was interesting. I liked the imagery and the story you told but I feel something is missing. Where is the emotions? Maybe I've read the wrong way or ...

I think you have something here. If you work on it a little it'll get better. Where it says who, what are you going to choose? I think that needs ...

I really loved this, it was just so beautiful. I felt like I was in a fairytale...I especially liked the third one.

Here is my entry for the On Fire contest its going to be sort of crazy but here we go... Flames of Injustice By Angel of Death The sounds of ...

This was beautiful and with a little more work it could be breathtaking. Please finish this has potential.

I would love to do this but I need help understanding exactly what I'm supposed to do.

I'm back!!! Whoa this was so intense I really can't wait to read the rest. Well I'll get to to the next part as soon as possible. P.S. You say ...

This was hilarious. Charlie is too funny, but Edward is just so different...and so care-free...I mean how is Bella going to fall in love with this Edward especially when he ...

Okay I love Twilight and Edward Cullen, and I also love Fangs now. People can say that Edward was made into a complete joke but I loved this. I was ...

I guess it could be Pop or R&B but I guess I was leaning towards Pop. This came to me for in my head one day I just start singing ...

I really liked this part of chapter 1, I like all of them! You are an amazing writer...I wish I could read more today but I have to go work ...

Okay now you have me crying. Why did Aganost have to die? Okay before I cry a river I have to tell you I'm hooked. Now I really want to ...